IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (2)

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (2)


      


The given bar chart portrays the breakdown of Heart Attack cases proportion in the USA measured by age and gender. Overall, it is noticeably discerned that the most dominant heart attack cases occur among the up to 65 years old man and women.

Turning into closer scrutiny, beginning the analysis with the younger group age, it is recorded that the 29-44 years old people suffer the minimal number of heart attack problem of 123,000. Particularly, it only attacks the men. Shifting to the middle age group, those people in 45-64 years old show the shocking number of heart attack that jump to 424,000 for men and 136,000 to women. Whereas in the preceding age group, women are not identified as the heart attack patient. Finally, the older individuals are, the bigger their potential of heart attack to break their health, it is clearly illustrated that in the older age group, the grandfathers and grandmothers suffer from the most cases of heart attack which are 440,000 and 374,000 respectively. 

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