IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (1)
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (1)
The
two provided pie charts reveal the statistical data regarding the online selling
for four differing retail sectors in Canada in the recorded year of 2005 and
2010. Overall, in spite of the fact that two business sectors encompassing
Video Games, and Food and Beverage experienced escalating selling in 2010, the
other two remaining sectors which were Electronics and Appliance and Home
Furnishing fell down significantly.
Turning
into closer analysis, in 2005, Electronics and Appliance sector conquered the
online retail business in Canada with 35% of total online selling. With 10%
until 13% lesser selling than the former sector, Home Furnishing and Food &
Beverage sectors became the second most important online retail market where
Canadians spent their budget to. On the other hand, Video Games sector sat in
the last position of the online selling with only 18% selling. Shifting to
1992, Food & Beverage and Video Games sector which were the last two slow
growing sectors 5 years before, grew up significantly which successfully took
32% and 23% of the total online retail selling to their selling record
respectively, 5%-10% jumping. On the other hand, both Electronics &
Appliance and Home Furnishing lost a number of their costumer which were 30%
and 25% respectively, 5-10% drop. However, Electronics Appliance was still a
major sector which sat in the second position of successful online selling in
this recorded year. Whilst, Home Furnishing was left behind as the sector with
the most minimal number of selling which was only 15%.
-Ummu Rofikah
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