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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (2) Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Sample Answer: Nowadays, using computer is an unseparated fashion from world population’s lifestyle which brings great impacts in many sides particularly to children. Even though it is undeniable that computer provide several usefulnesses, the damaging impacts outnumber the benefits. This essay aims to portray the harms caused by the phenomenon on children based on the characterized problems in many vital sides. From health standpoint, the overuse of computer which causes children to be uncontrollably addicted leads to several problems to children’s eyes and health lifestyle. Taking long time to stare at the screen of this electronic device in the lighting which is less than ideal harms eyes and triggers a number of sight problem, such as blurred vision, eye irritation and dry eyes. In the worse scenario, it causes future impact t

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (12) The given line graph portrays the statistical information regarding the amount of coffee exported from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica from 2002 to 2012. This figure is measured in kilograms of millions.             Overall, the most significant fact that emerge in the presented graph is that all these three countries experienced fluctuation in their coffee export proportion before subsequently growing up jointly in the end of recorded time period.  Turning into detail analysis, the graph reveals that Brazil started the recorded period with the coffee export proportion of below 13 kilograms that keep climbing up in the next several years.  However, it then slightly decreased to approximately 17 kilograms in 2010 before subsequently reaching the peak of almost 25 kilograms in the end of the period. Besides, Columbia also began its record with the increasing number of coffee export from 5 kilograms to almost 13 kilograms in 2016 before falling do

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (1) Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world.  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. Sample Answer: Language is an unseparable feature of human life that has magnificent function i.e. allowing human communication. There are a great number of languages spread out all over the world that characterize each tribe, country, and nation. Triggered by several reasons, many languages disappear each year. Some people consider this fact as an insignificant change since they discern that the fewer the languages, the more efficient the communication allowed. For the fact that language is the artefact of each races that consist of idiosyncratic identities, I will elucidate the reasons of why all languages are important and contribute to the richness of human living heritage. To begin with, language vary cross-culturally and they have t

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (11) The given pie charts and table reveal the statistical data regarding the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the recorded year of 1988, 1992, and 2000. Overall, the most significant fact that emerge was that the fish which were majorly imported from Canada and others in all recorded years with relative changes experienced a gradual increase of price between 1988 and 2000. Turning into detail scrutiny, in 1988, when the total amount of imported fish was valued 6.57 billion dollars by the United States, Canada become the biggest exporter of fish which contributed 60% of the total percentage. On the other hand, China and other sources exported minimal number of 13% and 27% respectively. Shifting to 1992, the imported fish was priced 8.52 billion dollars, 1.95 billion dollars more expensive. While the imported fish proportion from Canada plummeted to 34% with drop of almost half, other sources filled the gap of the US fish demand,

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (10)          The given table portrays the breakdown of the number of students entering four secondary school types in the recorded year of 2000, 2005, and 2009. Overall, despite the proportion of the attendees in three types of schools namely specialist, grammar, and voluntary-controlled schools declined relatively year to year, community schools’ attendee proportion kept escalating significantly each year. Turning into closer analysis, in 2000, voluntary-controlled school was the most attended school type where 52% of student proportion opted to study there. It was then followed by grammar schools with 24% of attendees. The other two of school types which were specialist and community schools were attended by the same figure of 12%. Shifting to 2005, when the average school types declined in pupil percentages, voluntary-controlled schools still led the highest proportion of attendee which was 38%. However, it lost 14% of its attendee compared to th

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (9) The given table compares the statistical data of pedagogical difficulties underlain in seven areas which were encountered by students of two primary schools in the year of 2015 and 2015. Overall, the students in the school A faced more problems than school B in both years. On the one hand, school A demonstrated proof of the reduction of students with learning problems proportion from 2005 to 2015, school B seemed to be failed in minimizing their number of students with educational problems. On the other hand, school B still had better students in the measured figure competence in which only In 2005, school A students experienced more learning difficulties than school B. For instances, while following instruction and concentrating in lesson were discerned as the biggest problems to school A students with the rate of 40% to 42%, school B students had a better ability in those areas with only 6% and 15% of less competent students. Besides, in liste

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (8) The given picture portrays the life circle of honey bee. Overall, it is obviously shown that a bee experiences 6 stages in 34-36 days of life circle before becoming an adult bee. In the beginning of its life circle, a bee starts from being an egg which hatches 9-10 days after being laid. A bee needs five days more to be separated from its eggshell. Two days afterwards, the cute nymph comes out from its eggshell. It subsequently experienced three waves of moulting as it grows. Along the next 2 days, the bee grow up in bigger size. After a while, the young adult ultimately emerges. Along with its growing up process, a young adult bee also has a stronger body that is indicated from the more mature body shape particularly in the abdomen side. The bee then continues to grow until turning into a fully mature bee four days later. In this phase, a bee is already mature enough to find another bee to marry. The female bee then lay one until two eggs eve

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (7) Sample Answer: The given diagrams portray the visual explanation regarding the cement production steps and concrete making process. Overall, in spite of the complex process of cement making which consists of five main stages from crushing limestone and clay until packaging which harnesses a number of differing tools, the concrete production requires a simpler process where only a single prominent machine being employed. In the initial process of making cement, limestone and clay are crushed together in the crusher that yields into powder. To make sure that those raw materials are well mixed, the powder is combined in the mixer before afterward being transferred to the rotating round heater in order to give equal heat to the mixed cement powder. The heated powder subsequently continues its process to the grinder where it is smashed to become cement. Ultimately, the final process organizes cement to be packaged in bags and ready to distribute. M

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (6) The given picture portrays the procedural information regarding the process of electricity production generated by geothermal energy. Overall, it is noticeably seen that the process is broken down into four stages which is started from pumping down the cold water and ended with generating electricity. As shown in the figure, in the beginning phase of the process, a massive amount of cold water is pumped down from the surface of the ground into the depth of 4.5 kg below.  Subsequently, after passing the injection well, the water is transformed to geothermal zone which is established from hot rocks that is functioned to elevate the water temperature into a specified high tension. Shifting to the next step, the hot water is pumped up through the production well to the condenser where it is conversed to be steam. Ultimately, the steam-powered turbine activates the most important processor, the generator, to manufacture energy as the result of these w

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (5)                         The given pie chart and table reveal the statistical data regarding the factors engendering global agricultural failure in the case of land degradation and particularly how it affected three regions of the world during 1990s. Overall, over-grazing and deforestation were the greatest problems that led to the worldwide land degradation which subsequently affected Europe significantly as the most degraded land compared to other  affected regions. Turning into closer analysis, concerning to the global land degradation basis, while the two main issues encompassing over-grazing and deforestation resulted the most jeopardizing agricultural problem which were 35% and 30% of worldwide land degradation respectively, over-cultivation also generated a considerable proportion of degradation problem which was 28%, 2 until 7 percent slightly lesser compared to the two former factors. In contrast, other cause only minimally affected t

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (4)   The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Sample Answer: The provided table compares the percentages of electronic household appliances owned by Britain Families in 1972 to 1983. Overall, the most significant fact that emerge s is that while television was the most popular household appliance, dishwasher and video were the rarest appliances among Britain in the entire recorded years.             Turning into closer analysis, Televisions and vacuum cleaner were always popular among Britain that the total ownership percentages for these appliances were 96.12% and 91.71% respectively. However Britain stopped using vacuum cleaner in 1983. Similarly, Britain families discerned refrigerator and washing machine as essential and the usage of this electronic appliances keep escalating from 73% and 66% in the opening recorded year to 94% and 80% in the ending year of 1983 respe

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (3) The two tables portray the breakdown of the consumption and the production of potatoes in five different regions globally in the recorded year of 2006 which are measured in kilogram per person and million ton consecutively. Overall, despite the fact that European consumed the greatest quantity of potatoes, Asia provided the biggest amount of potatoes in the recorded year. Turning into closer analysis, regarding potato consumption, Europe posed as the most consumptive region with 96.1 kg consumption per person. Similarly, North Americans demanded a huge need of potatoes that led this region to be the second greatest consumer with 57.9 kg per person, 38.2 lesser than the first region. In sharp contrast, the other remaining three regions encompassing Asia, South and Central America, and Africa only consumed a relatively minimal number of potatoes which were only 25.8, 23.6, and 14.1 kilograms per person consecutively, around 50% lesser than the

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (2)        The given bar chart portrays the breakdown of Heart Attack cases proportion in the USA measured by age and gender. Overall, it is noticeably discerned that the most dominant heart attack cases occur among the up to 65 years old man and women. Turning into closer scrutiny, beginning the analysis with the younger group age, it is recorded that the 29-44 years old people suffer the minimal number of heart attack problem of 123,000. Particularly, it only attacks the men. Shifting to the middle age group, those people in 45-64 years old show the shocking number of heart attack that jump to 424,000 for men and 136,000 to women. Whereas in the preceding age group, women are not identified as the heart attack patient. Finally, the older individuals are, the bigger their potential of heart attack to break their health, it is clearly illustrated that in the older age group, the grandfathers and grandmothers suffer from the most cases of heart attac

IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (1) The two provided pie charts reveal the statistical data regarding the online selling for four differing retail sectors in Canada in the recorded year of 2005 and 2010. Overall, in spite of the fact that two business sectors encompassing Video Games, and Food and Beverage experienced escalating selling in 2010, the other two remaining sectors which were Electronics and Appliance and Home Furnishing fell down significantly. Turning into closer analysis, in 2005, Electronics and Appliance sector conquered the online retail business in Canada with 35% of total online selling. With 10% until 13% lesser selling than the former sector, Home Furnishing and Food & Beverage sectors became the second most important online retail market where Canadians spent their budget to. On the other hand, Video Games sector sat in the last position of the online selling with only 18% selling. Shifting to 1992, Food & Beverage and Video Games sector which were t

DISCOURSE ANALYSIS OF THE FIRST AMERICAN PRESIDENTIAL DEBATE KENNEDY- NIXON (SEPTEMBER 26, 1960) HOWARD K. SMITH, MODERATOR: Good evening. The television and radio stations of the United States and their affiliated stations are proud to provide facilities for a discussion of issues in the current political campaign by the two major candidates for the presidency. The candidates need no introduction. The Republican candidate, Vice President Richard M. Nixon, and the Democratic candidate, Senator John F. Kennedy. According to rules set by the candidates themselves, each man shall make an opening statement of approximately eight minutes' duration and a closing statement of approximately three minutes' duration. In between the candidates will answer, or comment upon answers to questions put by a panel of correspondents. In this, the first discussion in a series of four uh - joint appearances, the subject-matter has been agreed, will be restricted to internal or domestic American